SpiritedWolfe

//inserts two cents In poetry, the rules of grammar can be bent and broken as the author pleases -- unless it takes away from the poem.

Again, I have no experience, so that makes sense xD I just wasn't sure if it was like an opening act or something, so that makes sense ~

Actual, the child part was directed at Jennifer :3 And she is younger than Luke xD Also, you really don't know what a first person shooter is? It's not something ...

Thanks! I already have a rewrite of this chapter which is vastly different posted here:

Uh, the blade hair was meant to be blonde xD There are a lot of typos because I wrote this in a hurry and on my phone. Also, the slashes ...

Oh, and this isn't the end of the chapter >.> This is only the first part, but I didn't have time to write it.

Oh, the slashes were to indicate italics because I forgot to go back and remove those, as I typed this on a place without that option xD Thanks for those ...

Thanks for the nitpicks ^^ This was typed on my phone, so it was very helpful ~ Glad you enjoyed it!

Your first assumption of the tiers were correct, the second example was awkwardly worded, I agree xD I'll be sure to fix that. The second one was kind of like ...

Thanks for the review! The Shadow Lord is neither male or female, but she goes by female pronouns, so it was intentional (even though, yes, Lord is usually reserved for ...

You two were so cute back then

Can I just like this seven thousand times, please? XD I'm leaving a review for both on the next chapter, because these are too good and a review on each ...

Actually, I haven't edited at all xD This is the same thing she read, aside from one nitpick. But thank you so much! You pointed out so many things I ...

"...which I have a feeling you'll do as the novel progresses." Here's a hint. Think of the title. :3

Yep xD With amnesia, I promise you there is a perfectly good reason for it and there are some things that go along with it >.> I know it's been ...