Spiffygirl

Right about the she, chocoholic. Thanks! The 787 is the plane Boeing is trying to release, but because of part delivery and speed issues, it's been delayed several times.

Thanks! I'll work on the sentence structure, then.

Thank you a lot! And you were right about the 'my'. Thanks for helping!

Another great Sherry story. Keep them coming, they're great! I can find nothing to critique.

Thanks, clograbby and Griffinkeeper, I think I finally understood what you meant. I tried to take the apathy part out (because it was awful) and tried to replace it with ...

Thanks, Kiss in the Rain, that was extremely helpful. I think I learned my lesson about editing at 3 am. To Griffinkeeper, thanks for the tip aboout writing in third ...