Spiffygirl

Not to be mean, but the post above mine is very mean. Anyways, I thought this was a hilarious story (except for the possibility of you getting in trouble and ...

Thanks, clograbby and Griffinkeeper, I think I finally understood what you meant. I tried to take the apathy part out (because it was awful) and tried to replace it with ...

Thanks, Kiss in the Rain, that was extremely helpful. I think I learned my lesson about editing at 3 am. To Griffinkeeper, thanks for the tip aboout writing in third ...

PROLOGUE There are too many vampire stories in the world. Mine is of another sort of demon, monster, whatever you would like to call us. But in nature, we are ...

I know the original artwork. This is "Blow Fish" by Nanami Cowdroy. I think you did a great job!

I love how, if you look closely, you see the eye is part of a face (yes, I know that's probably very obvious).

I love that you've already come up with piano solos. Obviously, you've probably have got a tune in mind. The song is very emotional and dramatic, and it makes for ...

This was a beautifully written story. I can tell that you put plenty of thought into describing this battered woman story. The part I had a problem with was the ...