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The title is very not final. I'm going to submit this into a contest for my school district, so I decided to make a sort of a metaphor for people's ...

It's a really nice piece. Very beautiful with the palm trees and pink sky. Unfortuneatly, it's sort of cliche. You see these sorts of pictures everywhere. And the top of ...

Haha, that was fairly clever. I have only one question: Why would a purple bird leave blue feathers? I understand the Blue's Clues reference, but wouldn't it have purple feathers? ...

That's really neat! I know when I tried to take pictures of fireworks, they got all blurry or I took the photo too early or too late. Me and my ...

Humanity: Chapter 1 (and prologue!) This is the second part. I hadn't had time to edit and post it, since I was so busy with drama. :? Anyways, the part ...

Quite wonderful! I was suspicious at first that it would be out of character, but the characters do correspond to the book quite well. Nessie's is the one you can't ...

Fortunately, the crows took flight and saved you, while all your crane friends died.

Quite the idea! It's very unique. I like the idea of the mother being so involved, instead of another parent who merely begs their children not to. The only thing ...

Right about the she, chocoholic. Thanks! The 787 is the plane Boeing is trying to release, but because of part delivery and speed issues, it's been delayed several times.

I was looking at laptop covers a month ago on Gelaskins, and they have a version of it. Glad to help!

Thanks! I'll work on the sentence structure, then.

Thank you a lot! And you were right about the 'my'. Thanks for helping!

A Different Kind of Hurt My father is not the worst in the world. He does not beat me: He does not yell at me. He would console me if ...

Another great Sherry story. Keep them coming, they're great! I can find nothing to critique.

Normally, I'm into fantasy and sci-fi, but this captured my interest very quickly. I especially loved this tidbit: giving me a flash of neon green-for-GO eyeshadow... I thought the imagery ...