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Re: A Whispered Secret - Chatper 1 *Arrival*
I've only read about half-way through, but here's my critque of what I read: I’m a fourteen -year -old girl who just moved from Florida to North Dakota. No need ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Tongue tied and Silly. (Andre & Starling)
I could not carry on with reading your work for the many puntual errors, silly wordings, ect. Here are some problems I had early on on the story, though it ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Hillsong - 1
I haven't done a review in forever, so it's refreshing to revise and critique this for you. If it's any consolation, I'm hardly 14? No. I have read works by ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Personality Test
You are: distinctively expressed introvert slightly expressed intuitive personality slightly expressed thinking personality slightly expressed judging personality
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Kyleigh Weiss; "Sure," I said. The three of us headed out to wonder about the campus. Heaps of kids around our age were disspursted throughout the hallways, and I nearly ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Kyleigh Weiss; Not one guy to room with, bu two. Still having a hard time to grip this, I opened up the door. The dorm, filled with large furniture, looks ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Kyleigh Weiss; Finally able to roll my luggage around with only a bit of discomfort, I walked inside of the building. The floors, nicely polished, reflected my appearance. Dressed in ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Kyleigh Weiss *Still room-mateless. Is it all right for a boy and a girl to room? If so, I'd like Brennan.* "Wonderful," I said sarcassticly as my dad pulled up ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Does Anyone know how to speak German fluently?
Ich spreche etwas deutsch. In Shule ich bin lehren. In deutsch ich bin nicht so gut, aber kenne ich etwas. Ich denke dein englisch ist sehr gut, chatte mit ich, ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Are we starting whenever any indivisual wants to start, or whenever Pudin wants to start?
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: I'm a new person here!I came to your earth to take control.
Why, hello, and welcome to YWS. I am Kiara, you can call me Kiki. Read the rules here before posting any writings. On the topic of writing: What do you ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Clothes, Fashion and Style
1. Would it be weird to wear Abercrombie all the time, and then in the middle of the week wear bondage pants? (The Hot topic pants with chains all over ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Kind of a confusing question
Mr. and Mrs. Whateverlastnameyourmaincharacterhas.
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Name: Kyleigh Clark Weiss Age: 16 Grade: 11 Gender: female Physical Appearance: -Nationality: American, family originally from Germany -Height: 5'8'' -Weight: 125lbs -Hair: Blonde, curly. -Eyes: Big a
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Rate the country above you
Some third-world country, because nothing is free anywhere else.
Jul 29, 2009
