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This is very well written, so you don't have too many errors or mistakes. She looked on her long , loose white blouse that reached up to her hips. …even ...

I must admit, I tend to be a bit shallow when it comes to a guy having a lasting impression on me just by his looks. I like guys to ...

I made (and ate) an omlette.

. W e just never bothered to notice it until tonight. Replace the comma with a period and have that be a sentence itself. “Cake hasn’t changed . I t’s ...

Are you asking for opinions of the cartoon movie aspect of Disney, or like the newer Disney stars like Hannah Montana and Jonas Brothers?

Some of you, who are similar with the show, may have noticed my fondness of it. It is one of my favorites, and I betcha can't guess who's my favorite ...

Hi, Realms. My name is Kiara. Sure, go ahead and call me Kiki. VI. i drowned as a child. lol, you probably won't beleive me... That isn't possible, since drowning ...

Isn't "bird" the British equivalent of the American "chick"? That's what I've heard anyways... That is what I have heard as well, though I'm guessing "Chick" is thrown around a ...

Atheism is anyone's choice to believe, though it is not what I believe. I am a Baptist Christian, and I feel that God does exist, as well as Jesus Christ, ...

This is a very nicely written story, though, some parts were contradicting and a bit unbelievable: She was tall, six feet actually, but she was very curvy. You mentioned earlier ...

8/10. You don't hear a lot of peole listening to THe Libertines here in America. "Under Pressure" - Queen "Sex on Fire" - Kings of Leon "The Phrase that Pays" ...

Welcome to YWS, Neebie. My name is Kiara, though you can call me Kiki, like everyone else does on here. I also suck at poetry, so don't feel alone.

Here is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on. Here is the link It's a fantasy piece.

...bore into my dull dark brown, almost black , eyes. She was utter perfection , everything about her was just so perfect . Redundency. She wore no makeup . S ...

I remember reading some of the chapters of your story. I say, do not change the plot. There will always be similarities someone's work will have to another person's. It's ...