SpencerNolanRivers

Hello. I am Kiara, and I'll be critiquing your work here. Mr . Bynes was one of a kind. If you are going to be using the abbreviated form of ...

Hello, my name is Kiara and I will be critiquing your work here. Oh… there’s a lot I can say about him. The underlined bit serves no purpose. Why is ...

Hello. My name is Kiara, and I will be reviewing/critiquing your piece today. Everything that defines who and what I am has made me different, strange, foreign ; an outsider. ...

They got him yesterday . They said that on the news. I move forward s and backwards in the same fast pace It’s somewhat soothing, I think . The motion, ...

He placed a single rose in my hand . I clenched it too tight, causing the thorns to cut into my hand Redundant. They started inching closer and closer and ...

I couldn't get through with reading your entire piece. I only read about a paragraph or so. It is hard to follow along in the story when it lacks a ...

Chloe S taring at the wide selection of generic greeting cards of various sorts in front of me, a bright pink one with the words “Happy Sweet Sixteen” caught my ...

I really enjoyed this piece. You are a swell writer, and only made a few mistakes on grammar and punctuation, which would easily be fixed by proof-reading. Although, I believe ...

I was referring to the first type of username change. Thanks, Snoink, for explaining all of that to me. I just wanted to trade off the username I choose when ...

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Hey, girl, hey! I am Kiara, and I will be critiquing your piece. Even though the chain mail was considerably lighter than the plate armor ( and she could move ...

Hello, I am Kiara, and I will be correcting and critiquing your work here. that is when he had been alive. this was all so odd. she shut her eyes ...

I feel like a horrible mother neglecting to care for her child xD. I go through strange periods where I log onto this place and am fairly active for months, ...

I've seen the movie last weekend, and I loved it. It's such a nice, touching story, and the movie itself was quite good. This movie has certainly made up for ...

I write short stories more often than novels or novellas. I naturally quickly lose the drive to continue them after a while, which is why I like to stick to ...