SpencerNolanRivers

The story was rather short, maybe it's 1/4 of a chapter, perhaps. Now for corrections; I don't feel like quoting them or copy and pasting, so a couple were when ...

Thanks, for all the critiques. I would edit and revise this, but I'm really can't find the state of mind to write well for the last couple of weeks. I ...

Tanke, Sie. Thats German for "Thanks, you all," or my German is just as bad as my writing right nowl.

Right now, it's really hard for me to find inspiration and to get in the right mind-set to write. The last work I've done was kind of rushed and forced ...

Emily This isn't what I want to be. This isn't how I want people to see myself. So many negative thoughts are swirling in my head while I'm trying to ...

Please Mr. Postman

This story was written very well, though I think you need to add much more details about both Carter and Adam (indivisually) so it bring more emotional feeling whenever the ...

I find this story really disturbing, but really good. It's so different from the usual stories I would read, or other people would write. I really want to read more.

There were a few minor grammar errors, but not enough for me to consider picking them all out. Overall, I really liked this. It's written very well, but I can ...

There's several grammar mistakes, but I'm too lazy to point them out. Overall, I like the story, it's all right. I think you should describe the settings and the other ...

There's a lot of simple grammar mistakes in the passage, but besides those here is what I think: The story should be much longer. I like it so far, and ...

Thanks for all of the reviews. I took them and revised the story again. I hope you all think it's a lot better.

Poetry isn't my strong suit, but I'm giving this a try. ------------------------------------------------------------- Isaac? I see this person everyday, He catches my eyes, That's all I can say. Isaac

I think the story was more in depth with Raven/Elizabeth being abused by her step-dad and having a drunken mother than her and Eric.

"Dammit, Amber!" He walked to the other side of the boat, rubbing his eyes in frustration , his nostrils flared and I started to bite my nails. As I sat ...