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Re: Inside the Mind of a 7-year-old Romantic
"Umm, I think Genevieve is here." I said to my teacher , Mrs. Martin. There should be a comma inbetween "Teacher" and "Mrs. Martin." "Honey, Genevieve doesn't come 'till the ...
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Re: Canned Peaches and Paper Sacks
I had wanted the same faraway paradise , u ntil Dad got sick. "Hello, Becca. Welcome home , " a nd then, "No , u ntil Wednesday." she had missed ...
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Re: Saved
"Ian , I can't get down!" Kali yelled from the highest branch of the oak tree. "I need to walk now. Please , Ian, you know I can't run as ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Last Tuesday
This was good, though I do not exactly understand the ending. Is the person the main character is in love with dead or non-existant? The beginning was very good and ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Anyone knows how to speak another language?
ich kann etwas Deutsch sprechen.
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Precious Illusions
I really liked this. Most definitely one of the best pieces I've read in a while. There were some minor mistakes and errors, but those are small to comparison of ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: A Girl Just Knows
I have dealt with this sort of plot before, but it turned out coming out horribly. Hopefully, this will be much better. Read and critique, pretty please. A Girl Just ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Celebrity Crushes? *giggle giggle*
-Angelina Jolie -Paul McCartney (back in his young days) -Olivia Wilde. she is simply gorgeous. -Penn Badgley
May 30, 2009 -
Re: The End
Prom and my date is Matt, who is also my best friend.. I nearly fell asleep of that it felt so good. Running my hands through my dark shaggy emo ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: A Single Flaw
S’okay,” I sputter, chugging down my glass of water, which being the only part of the meal that isn’t completely revolting. I close my eyes just a few seconds before ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Peace, Love, and California
It was a strange feeling knowing your wouldn’t be seeing your friends most of the summer ; the friends that you've spent almost every waking moment with, the ones that ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Crash
The noise of crunching metal, the stench of burning rubber, the taste of noxious fumes in the air. I could see the clouds of white smoke rising up in front ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Suicide Note
Not my best ever, but I needed to post something with all these points! Just kidding. Please review! My Dearest Mother, I’m sorry. I’m sorry that you have to bear ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: The Reason Why I Hate Mitchell Cornley Pt. I
I haven't written anything decent in a while, and I hope this redeems myself to anyone who've read my [failed] romantic piece, Emily. This also has the be the hardest ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight vs. Harry Potter
Harry Potter, no doubt about it. The only good thing about Twilight is Jacob. If there was no Jacob, which Meyers once said she orinally had it, Twilight would be ...
Feb 1, 2009
