SpencerNolanRivers

Naturally, I think woman are better 'story tellers,' not nessisarily writers. If you were to ask a woman how her day was, she would reply in a similar way to ...

Do not add a lot of characters that are not needed just to feel that your story would be better with them. A lot of the time, I despise how ...

I saw it a couple of days ago, and I did not like it. I wish it were more loyal to the book.

I would cry. What would you do if someone had the same person in both of their icons xD?

My younger brother brought that book into the house and I picked it up one day of boredom. It's a good book, but concept and characters are a bit too ...

I write down my stuff first, because I have no one ever bugging me to "Get off" of my notebook.

She has no talent, and it's even worse when she's only hyped up because of what she looks like. Yes, she is very pretty, but casting directors, the media, and ...

Don't pay attention to labels, they are only used to describe someone's personality and shouldn't be taken too seriously. No one ever fits into a mold 100%, so just remember ...

Saturday mornings are always the quietest. Everyone takes a break from the work and lounge sandwiched between their bed for a couple of extra hours, takes no interest in the ...

I like October's Burn the best, since October has more of a firey-like color than of December, but whichever title you choose is your choice.

Thank you for the critique, I have now edited a lot of the things you have suggested.

The heavy chatter doesn't help me concentrate. Eyeing the multiple, several-stepped word problems looking back at me as they all lay spread across the white paper. I don't know the ...

I liked this a lot, though some parts were really confusing. I love the way you write overall, though some parts I wish to change. I was not expecting a ...

The roar of the nearby crowd overwhelmed Kyle Stone’s senses; I hate that you introduced the main character to directly and just in the first sentence of the story. singing ...

haha, it makes me giggle. 7/10