SpencerNolanRivers

1)Which side of your jaw do you chew on? Left, since that's my dominate side. 2)Can you write with both hands(ambidextrous),or..are you just plain lefty or righty? Lefty. 3)Do you ...

I hate the term "Vegetarian vampires" because a vampire cannot be vegetarian. Blood from anywhere is from an animal, and since when do they eat vegetables? I'm sorry. I'm a ...

Smooth Criminal.

There aren't too many mistakes I could pick out. Good job. It started normal enough and therefore he was magic al . “Fuck this,” said I . I dunno wether ...

I didn't find too many mistakes or phasing of things I didn't like in this, that's good. April, May (April"s younger sister) and June (April's mother ) had no clue ...

Unlike women, men do not like to be bothered whenever they are angry, upset, or sad. A lot of women would like to confide in someone, or have someone ask ...

I hadn't read the entire thing, had too many errors and mistakes and it discouraged me to continue. Also, I didn't want to overwhelm myself with too many corrections to ...

Of course the whole teacher-being-with-student is not believable. That's why I wanted to write about that sort of situation. As I continue the story, I will later on reveal why ...

By the way, Roon, I meant "Twenty-pound bag" as in the weight of the bag, not the price. I am American, we use dollars here, and the story also takes ...

"I'm sorry." she said to her, taking grip of the hand of the person she keeps dear to her heart. She sensed a high level of disapointment in her eyes, ...

Hello, Summer. I am quite fond of your name. I once wrote a romantic short story with a character named Summer, and guess where it took place. California! By the ...

Hi. Welcome, Roon. My name is Kiara, though most on here just call me Kiki. It's nice to have you join us. And it's okay, I'm a fan of ramblers. ...

I intended for it to sound like a gossip girl novel, i went straight in with the action instead of explaining everybodys character and things like that. Imitation is the ...

A small kid with Keira Knightley posters all over his wall, and wishes to some day bumb into her small chest while walking down the street one day.

I think skill maters over soul. If someone has a story to tell within their soul, without skill, they will not convey it well through words and paper.