Spazztardchild

@Dementer: Thank you for the welcome! Yes, YWS, Pride and Prejudice and Firearris are awesome! I will await to see if you can help me about my novel *hopes and ...

Ooo thank you Snoink :)!

Stalker alert! Poems: actually easy. But then again, I did Cluster 2 which methinks was easy anyway. Search For My Tongue + Presents For My Aunts in Pakistan FTW :P ...

Ah, thanks for the knowledge :) I shall go look at the wiki page !

Floral Arrangements It just popped into my head.

After trying and failing several times, I've decided that writing fights with swords is too hard. Everything I have written seems to be dead and boring. It's a fight between ...

I hope it's not raining around your area like it is mine...... Beautiful English weather, no? Luckily, it's not raining at the moment. Poor you for having to suffer through ...

I have a phobia of the word 'defiantly'. ... possibly because of the many FanFics I have read with incredibly bad spellers who actually mean to type definitely. *shudders* Needless ...

Yay! I changed it. But didn't change it. But did. :smt105 Basically rewrote it, so it is a little more friendly. Let nothing go wrong today, for the Sisters are ...

The only thing that I can critique on is the mixing of formality and informality doesn't really read too well. It seems like you are writing Echo as an extroverted ...

I agree with the two people above me; stop being comma-happy and start italicizing. You have a great vocabulary and I am very very jealous of you, big time. Such ...

I'ma do the shortened version per paragraph instead of sentence ... lol [nc] = no comma, [s-c] = semi-colon and [i] = italics this is the piece i did for ...

Thank you so much for the crit. I've never been happy with that Prologue; it was written some years ago and I've never known how to make it better without ...

The sounds of a woman giving birth filtered around the rural village of Tumblegreat. The screams of agony pierced the eardrums, countered by the gently soothing voice of the aged ...

Cute romance! An original twist on the concept of witches and their familiars. My questions are: When is this set? Modern times or Ye Olde Medieval Tymes? Also what is ...