Spazztardchild

OK. I'm not so much of a fan of HSM ... :| Errm you have missed out a heck of a lot of capital letters at the start of your ...

Tangled Up In Blue, done! Who's next?

Arrgh no! They didn't end up together. I could sense it coming, anyhow. ... more than them being together anyway. Tangled Up In Blue was one of the best romantic ...

Ima agree with Sam, above me there! Not one nit pick, which is unusual for me and a celebratory event for you! *Shakes hand* I like the grime. The way ...

Oh wowzers! I really loved reading this - it is so good, there is not much to say! but one of the breasts is off Eeek! That sounds a bit ...

I will do my best to crit anything given to me! Can do list: Grammar Plots Dialogue General flow of the piece Atmosphere Brutal honesty In return, can I *pretty* ...

Ooo me please! *waves frantically* There is a prologue that received much love ... so I'm not expecting a crit for that :) Here it is any way: Thanks!

Yay! I changed it. But didn't change it. But did. :smt105 Basically rewrote it, so it is a little more friendly. [s]Does anyone know how to make indents? I don't ...

I like this. I have never seen or read Eragon but, it sounds quite good based on what you have written. I obviously cannot say much more, because of the ...

Thank you Demeter, Dynamo, V12dude for the comments :)! Your crit has been a ray of sunshine on something I have never bbeen happy with. So thank you for making ...

I third on the being 'hooked'! Add me to your long list of people to be PM'd when you release the next chapter please! The way you have described the ...

I love this start to your story! It's very unique. Tara seems to shine, she is that sunny, which is rare in a story of this type; they're normally all ...

Meh, some are good. I actually prefer to listen to American or Scandinavian music to UK music. The bands tend to be a little better, somehow. Just a matter of ...

I must say I don't like rap either ... but nobody likes everything, eh? If saying that you listen to everything is a cliche, then it is a very true ...

I normally listen to anything that smells of rock and roll! So that's metal, punk, funk, rock etc. Favourite bands would be Coheed and Cambria, Metallica, Children of Bodom, Operator ...