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Thanks, Mad. I'm not quite as happy with this for some reason, but I think working on later chapters and coming back to it will help

The ritual was practiced. The only thing that kept this from being another rehearsal was the screams. *were the screams. Screams is being modified by was, and since screams is ...

Here's a novel I'm "working on". -- Chapter One Paige realized she was born into the wrong family a long time ago. However, as she stared into her mother’s almond-shaped ...

Thanks, Mad! My problem is I generally lose patience with pieces longer than about 500 words or so. *eyes my two unfinished novels*

Thanks everyone! I always swap tenses... it's annoying, because I can never catch it! I'll fix those little errors, and try to iron out difference between her father and her ...

Yin Yang It was only twenty degrees outside, but I wasn’t cold. Was it even possible to be cold when someone is so angry? I knew going to my mother’s ...

Thanks for the comments everybody! I might be posting a second short story of mine in a few days. I don't like it as much though hehe

The cold is good to a point, but once it's march and the temperature doesn't get above freezing for a week you start to get tired of it. I want ...

Method a la Spark: Blue is highlighted for change/comments. Bolded things are my comments. Anything in [brackets] is stuff I've added or changed. Anything underlined get rid of. As the ...

Thanks guys! Yep, it's an old work. I revised it since then though. Thanks again

A friend of mine is both a lawyer and a career writer, so you can have it both ways. Well, maybe I'll become a lawyer, and then make enough money ...

Haha, actually, Little-Lucy, one of my best friends is from Australia and I know they don't actually do that :) I didn't mean to offend anyone. Hello, everybody else!

Soda pleaseeeee. And or water. Nothing else unless I'm in a weird apple juice mood which happens every now and again.

No, I'm not from Australia, so there was no reason for my subject other than the fact I have run out of creative subjects to use. I'm Spark, if you ...

Hi, I'm a new user. This is a short story I wrote a while ago. Let me know what you think. - Mother died today. It had been a long ...