Southern_Belle

Hey, I really liked your story! I've always loved Greek mythology, and the way you invented the seven deadly sins is incredibly creative!! I loved it!! And I have to ...

I really liked the Abhorsen Triology, though I don't really think it's better than Harry Potter (we're big HP fans where I'm from!!), and I never really got into Lord ...

"We're going to need to travel that on ship. The water is too deep. Our horses wouldn't be able to handle it." King Evan's party was mounted on horses, looking ...

It was the day before Daymore and King Evan were to leave and search for the Euranian Stone. King Evan was in the castle basement, searching for a map, or ...

Hey, thanks for posting!! I agree with you that my story was lacking emotion when it came to the dueling scene, and I was aware of it, actually. I just ...

It had been two years since the kidnapping of Prince Daymore Gibson, and not once had the Dark Realm been suspected, except for a couple of worthless rumors in newspapers ...

Spring of the Eight Hundredth Year of the Cardinal "Now where is this kid?" "Shush! . . . In the Autumn Springs Kingdom." Second Commander McCray and Fourth Captain Price ...

It was a normal Monday morning in late April. I was standing on the sidewalk outside my apartment building, waiting for a taxi as I always do on weekday mornings. ...

Very good story! Now, my critique is probably going to be a bit biased, since I am thoroughly interested in the American Civil War and know a lot about it. ...

It was fast approaching ten o’clock in the morning, and sunlight flickered down through the trees, bouncing off the metal of the pistols’ barrels. The heat was close to unbearable. ...

Great theme. I loved it. Too many times people take friendships for granted, and I think this poem conveys the thoughts that we should all remember when we feel like ...

First of all, I really really like your imagery. It gives my imaginiation a burst of color, and I feel like I can see the leaves, and smell the air. ...

Hey all!!! I would like to take this time and space to let everyone know that I meant no harm by my last post, and did not intend to offend ...

O why do I bother to think, my dear? Why must I attempt to capture thy love? Why is't that I should have nothing to fear? Thy heart is a ...

O to gaze 'pon thy truly handsome face, To place my hands upon thy gorgeous frame, To desire of thy love and perfect grace: All are sins disgraceful e'en to ...