Soulkana

This was well done. It is short but tells a story strong in both emotion and understanding. I must say I'm impressed my only advice is to cap every first ...

I write this slowly. Each word engraved, With the pain of my heart. I can only think back. Back to your hurt shouts, To the tears in your eyes. I ...

I must say this touched me very deeply haha. I enjoyed it but was the repeating of one of those stanzas intentional? They seem to flow very nicely with it ...

Adriana!! This was very emotional and touching. The impact it implies and shows is very amazing. You make a wonderful poet ^^. I loved this. I can't really find anything ...

Always writing Adriana. Six shall be up and running possibly in a few days for I am struggling with some things of importance and writing just seems to not help ...

Hey I loved this. I can't really say anything really wrong other than add a little bit more characteristics to them? Or something haha I can't really find any faults ...

Since I haven't read any of the other chapters I might be off a little bit but to be honest I loved this chapter ^^. Still very gripping and impacting. ...

Omgosh this was soooo beautiful and inspiring!!! I just love it!! I can't find anything, anything at all I would want to change or say seems off because I can't ...

Well I like this chapter or rather...chapters lol. Well you've peeked my interest and am deciding to read the earlier ones that I can. I loved your beginning and the ...

Well I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. My only advice is shortening the lines so it flows smoother. It was rather difficult with its flow but other than that this was ...

Very beautiful!! I say this was well done but what's with the dots? Maybe that's just me but it both adds to its beauty and also somewhat distracting. Overall however ...

Hey sweets!! Here to review!!! Well I must say this is much better than the first but you're still lacking in the emotional parts. Show us what they're feeling add ...

Chapter 5 I sit down at the base of the tree. It was a respectable distance from the girls who eye me warily. With Hisoka standing where we landed looking ...

I absolutely adored this story!! Almost cried at the end it was so sad and touching!!! I really can't say anything is bad with it since I'm not good with ...

Hahaha. Nice ^^ Glad to know we love to support our members ^^.