Soulkana

Criticism is appreciated. This is as far as I have gotten on chapter 2 but it may get longer as I continue typing. Chapter 2 Silent screams escape Nastusia as ...

The faint click of the front door being unlatched stirs Nastusia from peering with mixed contempt and delight at her newborn brother, Damien. Turning to go find her parents, she ...

The runes of old. Stopping time and Speaking futures. Intricate complexity Bound in symbols Of cryptic powers. Tied within the Ancient families, The talen bears A devastating past. The pure ...

Chapter 2 With gentle strokes of the wet cloth Silas washes off the dried blood upon the young girl. As the skin becomes bare the gravity of her injures becomes ...

Feel free to rip it to shreds, my wonderful reviewers!!! Hahaha. Hope you enjoy. ^^ Chapter 11: The Inheritance I gaze down at the board thoughtfully. I ignore the persistent, ...

Okie first off I loved this very very much haha. The only thing I can honestly think wrong is this part: Just by simply ignoring their vicious threats and warnings, ...

Well this idea seems rather unique although I must concede it was rather confusing to didn't seem to flow right somehow. But I really did like this and I get ...

Okay guys! This is something I really want to work on at the moment to ease away my boredom with another novel so...feel free to rip it to shreds!!! Grammar, ...

Chapter 7: What is this? Amana’s POV I could smell the smoke before I could see it. The pungent odor makes me shudder as Evelyn holds out a hand to ...

Hey Rosey. I have to say I liked this. I was a bit confused but maybe that's because I haven't read anything else in the story or so. I couldn't ...

I truly loved this poem first of all. The emotion and the truth within it was very inspiring. My only problem with this is that some of the lines are ...

*PROLOUGE* It's spelled Prologue Okay so lets get something straight here. First, Were we're not real jesters, thats that's just our code name. Second, were we're a whole team of ...

I must say this confused me a little and did you mean Prologue? Epilogue comes at the end of a story not the beginning? But I think that this is ...

Wow. This was breathtaking in its tale! It captures my attention at once and I couldn't wait to find out what would happen next. My only question is: What's she ...

Chapter 6 “Let us burn down this village. It will be the perfect location for conquering the Northern lands, My Lord.” A commander smoothly replies as he and his Lord ...