Soulkana

Wow once again AMAZING WORK!! Hope to see more and hope to find time to read more of yours but alas school calls me away and Good luck on writing ...

Hey good job Solvalery everyone's already fixed mistakes so i'm gonna say AMAZING POEM and hope to see more soon ^^ I'm doing a lot of stuff for school so ...

OMG well done well done. Have to say i never could write that good at your age but keep it up and you'll be an even greater writer when you're ...

Chapter One Maya carefully shut the ancient books of spells by Xavier Bloodrose. She, glanced up and watched her amethyst eyed raven perch on her small, wooden windowsill. On its ...

That was rather spooky i may say but i enjoyed the poem anyway. That was rather epic i must say. I like the descriptions and your poem was amazing. I ...

Omg that was very spooky and thrilling at the same time XD Hope you get lots of reviews you deserve it that was really amazing. Indeed it was long but ...

Omg that was amazing. You have an awesome writing style and i hope to read more when you update. I couldn't really see any problems at all with this chapter. ...

This was amazing and I envy your ability to describe and not over describe. This was truly amazing and very, very creative and well thought through. I shall keep reviewing ...

That was a very amazing and insightful poem. I wish i could write poems like that! I really loved it and I can't find anything bad to say its so ...

Chapter 2 Rewrite I felt something soft brush against my cheek, and startled into wakefulness. I opened my eyes and glanced around, by pure habit to make sure nothing was ...

That was an interesting story and it shows true emotions and truth in some relationships which is great. I'm not a person who can just put emotions out like that ...

That was a sad poem but still it was good. I really liked it and I know that inspiration to write can come from anywhere and at any time. Sometimes ...

That was amazing and slightly sad. But it was also very insightful. It is true in some ways. Like as a child you are oblivious to some things but children ...

Wow that really scared me!!! IN A GOOD WAY THOUGH. You are an amazing and talented writer. You can bring forth a picture just from reading it while I have ...

OMG that was incredibly BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! I stink at poems but I love reading them. Love it how it tells the story and how you described several things and how beautiful ...