Soulkana

Want to say I absolutely love your work^^ I truly loved the creativity you showed and also shall eagerly await the next chapter for you have caught my curiosity with ...

Thanks for the Reviews and I shall take your advice to work once I finish rewriting my stories due to a sudden change in my style as of late. I ...

Prologue Long ago, deep in the peaceful forests of the Realms of Ascar, thousands of creatures live in peace, respecting the ways of the Ancient Ones, the stars, whose voice ...

Chapter 2: Shadow's POV I stood in the kitchen, remembering the laughter, tears, and anger that once lived here. Gone was the one person that brightened our lives. Her smile ...

Chapter One I stood in front of my old home, slightly hesitant to go inside. To remember the good times mingled in with the bad. To happiness and the slowly ...

Since everyone has already put in their opinions I wish to say I think if you spaced the paragraphs and dialogues it would much easier to read but other than ...

I want to say this was absolutely AMAZING and fantastically done. I have a few corrections to point out. The things that I corrected shall be in red. I handed ...

Dear dregymayfield i would like to say amazing job and would like to point something out. When you use the words that are combined like don't why do you put ...

WOW you did really great and i am really happy that I was able to log on to read this ^^ Also since someone has already pointed out the mistakes ...

Thanks for the reviews y'all and i'll try to work on it more hahaha once i'm done with speech ^^

Wow that was amazing and good job and hope to see much more from you^^ you were amazing and hopefully you will continue on with this one for i wish ...

The sun began to rise on an island in the middle of the Janenia Sea. The island was rather large, with jagged rocks and boulders making up its shore, making ...

I have a few things to correct but you did VERY good in describing the way friends are to one another and how important they are to each of us ...

WOW that was AMAZING! "She's has long long long red hair. Rouge lips and grey eyes. . . where Is she?" Yet no-one knows. Did you mean for is to ...

Prologue Siva glanced behind her as she held her twin daughters. The animals were keeping a close eye out for their shared enemy, Dijns. Cloaking the night around her, Siva ...