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Re: Plot for new novel along with some needed help
Alright lovelies! Currently I'm outlining a plot so I can write it once I have the creative urge to do so. At the moment I have decided to have a ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: Hikari No Ganseki Chapter 1
Chapter 1 "Forgive me for interrupting you, Lord Eirlys but will you be late again tonight?" One of the elderly servants, Mia, ventures out softly as she comes up next ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: The Present
I stare down at the small rectangular device in my hand with a blank face. How on Escha do I use this, what did Yuzura call it? Cell phone? I ...
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One: Rewrite
Um....clothing wise it's near our age...and technology a little bit. Traditional wise its kind of old with the whole Matriarchy ruling and stands on its own I guess.
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Ten: NaNo
Aaah as I read over I can find many mistakes haha ^^ And thank you darling!
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Puppet's Dance
Hello Smiley! I absolutely loved this!! So gripping it pulls me in with the first sentence! I really can't find anything wrong with grammar or spelling or plot line...never been ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Broken Heart
Hiii BrokenSkye!!! First of all I wanna shout, "THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!" Haha
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Twelve: NaNo
Chapter 12 Takeshi turns his attention back to the children as Amya enters the hallway. Glancing over at her suspiciously he hoped that whatever her father had needed to discuss ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Eleven: NaNo
Chapter 11: The castle lay only a few feet in front of the group and despite this its grace and beauty binds the children as they take in the awe ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Ten: NaNo
Chapter 10 The group turns around to spot Lord Redmoon leaning up against one of the many trees, eyes glowing with a predatory hunger. He moves closer, saying, "At first, ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Nine: Nano
Chapter 9 Yuuki, formerly Nastusia, leans up against a tree watching nearby townsfolk go about their daily lives not noticing the extra people nor seeming to care why they had ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Serenade Chapter 1
Hey Adriana sister ^^ I have a few corrections if I can find it haha Chapter 1 - Edward It was sunset in the glorious city of Summerfell and even ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Five: Nano
Sorry I meant to do it when I post it but when I have been working on homework I tend to forget I'll fix that ^^
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Eight: Nano
Chapter 8: Clack. Clack. The sound of footsteps along the dim corridor echoes through the air, as Lord Unar strides towards the door at the end. Alongside him, a small ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Mistake XD
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Nov 23, 2011
