Soulkana

Haha awesome sister!!!! I love it and good job have a good day sweets!!! I am working on Chapter 5 now

Well Thanks for the compliment Tylyn, I didn't think I improved all that much...but now I"m happier haha. Yes and using emotions is still rather difficult for me. Hugs* Thanks ...

I only have the suggestion to shorten the lines but other than that; that is all the corrections I have. Fear fogs the mind; you clench your eyes as you ...

He channels heat through me with every look Every gaze he gives me sends shivers If only he knew, if only he knew If only he knew I exist If ...

I would shorten the lines so that the poem flows smoother^^ Here's a suggestion I was walking and I was whistling, I was quite happy that day That was before ...

Amazing Tylyn I could feel the emotion you put into it. I hope to see more of your lovely work!!! Love it. Keep up the good work Tylyn! Good luck ...

Chapter 5: Adoption Anulekha drifted into the room. Graceful and reserved footsteps allowed her the capability to sneak in without being spotted. She let a small smile appear on her ...

A tree in a field Speaks to me In a manner of bewild' I don't know why but it does and no matter how I try to look away, I'm ...

They say home is where the heart is, Which is most-likely true, In that case, I should be over-seas with you. I pray to God, as days pass, 'Let him ...

I've already let go of your hand, yet you still hold on; You think I'm there beneath you, but the truth is that I'm gone. With the wind I have ...

I agree with you ty! I wanted to review again since I reread it and fell in love with it again!!! Very moving piece you have here and can not ...

Awesome I really like it. Made me smile and want to join in haha. Well good luck and keep writing. I shall await more. Good luck and Happy Writing!!! Soulkana

Hahah I like them although the bottom one, the leg sticking out looks way too long XD but I'm no drawer so XD Anyways I think its great. Especially the ...

Awesome poem although I'd change it so the lines are short, by hitting enters on some commas such as this: I think back to the days of when I loved ...

Nice hostility, I could feel the anger and emotion you placed in this piece ^^ Well good luck and Happy Writing!! Soulkana