Soulkana

Amazing job ^^ Really loved your descriptions and could practically see the world this poem paints. Hopefully you will add more soon ^^. I will look forward to reading it. ...

I like this and I can't wait to read more, I have one question. Why is the story in the spoiler? O.o confused me hahaa. Well I shall keep tabs ...

I really loved this chapter and will read more once I have read through my new chapter and edit it. Also as a suggestion I would say to space the ...

I love this. Its a very good expansion and edited version of chapter 2. I hope you are going on with this. It will be amazing to read more. ^^ ...

Rather confused by what happens. But other than that I think its great. This sounds great and are you going to continue with this? I want to read more very ...

Nice descriptions and wonderful emotions in this story. I really really really love it. I hope you write more soon, so I may read more. But as of right now ...

Hmm my curiosity tells me to ask what this was about since some of the words I have never heard of nor know what they mean. But other than that ...

Wow that was amazing. Was sitting on the edge of the stage of the school as I read this and almost dropped the laptop in shock and amazement. You did ...

First thing I wish it was longer. Also I was surprised that you didn't have much description. And it leaves very many questions left unanswered, who was the young man? ...

Very descriptive. I just wish it was longer, there is so much more you could tell in this. I couldn't see any spelling errors at this moment. I really sincerely ...

Sargon gazed out of the small window in his cell. The floor was damp and cold, the sound of guards just outside filled the many halls of the prison. Sitting ...

Awesome I really loved it and can't wait to read more. Good luck and Happy Writing!!! Soulkana

Awesome poem I really loved it. Could practically see the image in my mind ^^ Good luck and Happy Writing!!! Soulkana

"Let me out, dammit!" i I screamed, kicking the wall hard enough to hurt myself. I had been running from Dr. Shay and her goons since I was fourteen, and ...

Epicness haha good luck and i'll read more when my laptop isn't on reserve battery. Bye bye good luck and happy writing!!!!! Soulkana