Soulkana

I liked this very much!!! Awwws she left? I hope you add more I want to know so badly what happens next ahaha!!! Good luck and hopefully you get more ...

Chapter 5: Unexpected Surprises Alexis grabbed a bowl and a glass. Setting them on the table she turned to get the Lucky Charms. She saw her mother walk into the ...

Good luck and Amazing. I'm happy I read this. I could feel the emotion and can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work I plan to read more ...

Very good. I love how you did this through the point of view of the man who died. It gives very emotional and descriptive insight. Hope to read more of ...

This is well done. Very beautiful and descriptive. I would shorten the lines so you can read it better. Other than that I can't see any spelling errors or grammar ...

I really love this, my only problem is there isn't any emotion? What is it you want us to feel from this? It leaves me wondering. It sounds great you ...

This is beautiful I love!!! I love the emotion you put into this. It makes it feel so alive and thrilling. The emotion in this is very easily seen which ...

Good job; though I say like the others before me this is rushed a bit. You need to add some background into it. I have many questions that make me ...

The only correction I have is in one of the first few paragraphs. One says DENT but I think you meant to say DENY. Other that this is a very ...

This is made me sad. Made me cry because it was so beautiful..and amazing. I love it so much and can't wait to read more haha. Good luck ok? Keep ...

Thanks for the help. Needed to get an opinion on this since it means very much to me as she means a lot ^^ anyways I'll work on it haha...before ...

This story is special as it was for my girlfriend; as such the plot will not be changed but I want help fixing it up; as such what it changes ...

Uh ok ^^ Um thanks for the review and I"m still perfecting this and I noticed that fragmented sentence just going to be farrrr toooo busy this week to do ...

I really like this. I could feel the emotions in it and understand it very well. This made me grin because you sorta described my personality to my school LOL. ...

Well this was a very interesting topic and I can see the logic in it. Hopefully this gets many reviews. You explained it rather well and made me laugh at ...