Soulkana

Very good poem. You painted a very nice picture in my head! Hope to see more from you and I could not see any grammar or spelling mistakes in this ...

I sat on my bed at home, bored out of my mind. Thinking of things to do, i should be I finally settled on taking a walk through the woods. ...

I do respect it I never said I didn't!! Also I was typing fast lols. So thats what with the I"m haha. And yes yes every kid has homework I ...

This is totally awesome....just wish it was longer and you added to it...I really would love to see how this all turns out in the end. However, do as you ...

This is good; very well done. However there are some things you need to work on. One is the spacing of paragraphs like Ilovebubbles123 has pointed out. It is major ...

Very amazing and rather very descriptive. I could picture this taking place rather easily. Want to know what happens so I hope you add more to this soon!!! Good luck ...

Dear god this was beautiful!!! I want to read more like sooon!!! I hope you plan on adding more to this it would turn out amazing!!!!! Good luck with this ...

Haha I am not very descriptive in my mind and yet I say you went a little overboard with them! But oh well it was still awesome and I can't ...

Very good work here!!! Painted a really good scene and very descriptive so thats a plus haha. Well I can't find any spelling or grammar errors nor punctuation. So good ...

I say awesome even though its quite shorter than the last one!! Lols anyways this is beautifully done and very inspiring!!! Hopefully I read more of your works soon they ...

Hmm this is very interesting and leaves me many questions like What will happen next? Good plot and it seemed to run smoothly as far as I can tell...lol. Anyways ...

Well that was a truly intriguing and amusing poem. The boulder wanting to be human haha. It worked out marvelous lols. Good descriptions and it made me think back to ...

Very good job. The descriptions and the emotion painted a very well done picture of this person. It made me cry at the end which is usually always good HAHA. ...

You made this even more interesting now!!! I want to know what happens please continue on with this!! The corrections really helped this a lot. Still leaving me wanting more ...

I like this it is very descriptive. Its like you're painting a scene with this. I loved this very much ^^ Hopefully you will keep writing!!!! I can't wait to ...