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Re: Alive
I really like this. Very inspiring and Descriptive!!! I can feel the emotion and dedication you placed in this!!! I love it and can't wait to read more of your ...
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Re: The Fire
Good poem!!! I really loved the emotion and description you guys put into this. I was confused by the rhyme but other than that I really loved this. Hope you ...
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Re: Rinse and Repeat
This is really great and I can feel the emotion you put into this amazing work. I also can see the time you put into it. This is very descriptive ...
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Re: Vagrancy
This is a good poem and very deep. Good luck and I hope to read more of your works soon. There is a lot of description and feeling in this ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Manipulate. Criticize. Forget.
I really like this. It has good descriptions and also good Great job with that. i couldn't find any spelling errors at all. Good luck with this and hopefully you ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: The Puppet Master (New Version)
Hmm this is interesting and I can't wait to read more. Good luck!!! I couldn't find any spelling errors. So that's good. Also you have good descriptions and emotions in ...
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Re: Into The Mystics
“You have to fight it . I can’t do it for you! Remember who you are. Think back to all of the times we had together, I know the real ...
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Re: Novels and Novellas
Will you read this if you have time please?
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Prologue
Thanks for the reviews guys I just need to take a break from writing this week and focus on my essays for history so I'll store the corrections till then. ...
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Re: Child in Chains
That was sad. It was very descriptive and and it painted a good but sad painting in my head. I hope to read more of this story soon if you ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Prologue
Prologue: Fog blanketed the ground, concealing the advancing army. Alexis stood in front of the gates of the Academy of Mage. She stood tall and radiated the power of her ...
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Re: Eleanor *Novel in Progress* PROLOGUE
Well this is an interesting start. I could picture this very clearly in my head; my word is to make it longer. Other than that this is a very good ...
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Re: Broken
This made me cry; I actually understand completely what you are saying. You put a lot of emotion into this and it makes me very happy to read it; it ...
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Re: My Parents Think I'm Gonna Kill Myself...
This is very intense and very descriptive. I could feel the emotion and could see the picture scene very clearly. So I say awesome job and I hope you write ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Rescuing Demons
I like this and you have me a very clear picture in my head. Very well done and amazing descriptions. Keep up the good work I hope to see more ...
Apr 16, 2011
