Soulkana

I really loved this!!! I can see the emotion behind this. I can also see a vivid picture from your descriptions. I hope you write more soon so I may ...

This is very good and I loved it. I have only one thing to say try to shorten the lines so it flows smoother...if you can ^^ Otherwise the descriptions ...

Good job. This poem of yours has a lot of descriptions which painted a very vivid picture in my head which is good!! There is very deep emotion in this ...

Chapter 7: Rin She walks in front of me on the way to science. I pause in my walk to see a girl, Rachael, trip her. I scowl, wondering why ...

Awww this was heart melting sad and beautiful!!! The emotion and description is just breathtaking!!! I really have no corrections to this piece at all; hence why I stink at ...

"And the lovebirds still sing As they together take wing;" I would make this two lines right after the sing so Its not the only long line in the whole ...

This is very good. This idea is very curious and interesting. Your descriptions are very detailed and give me a very clear picture in my head. I hope to read ...

Do you know the storms that reside in my heart? Are you there amongst my struggle, as I am taken away and torn apart? Can you see the hell that ...

Good job sister!! Am happy you updated and Keep up the good work!!! The description and emotion in this really inspires me haha. Hopefully you will update again very very ...

All I say is to cap your I's and that is all I have to correct. Other than that there is good descriptions and very deep emotion. Good luck and ...

This is very good!! Good descriptions and the emotion is very vivid. You did a good job with this and I can't wait to read more of your works. I ...

This is amazing and beautiful. It is also very sad and inspiring!!! I'm speechless and it makes me want more and more Please Update soon!!!! You did good I just ...

Good job Tylyn its beautiful and very dark. But that's a good thing it makes it very amazing and wonderful. I loved this and I can't wait for you to ...

Good job with this!!! I really loved it and it had a lot of descriptions and that made it clear in my head. You used a lot of emotions as ...

This gave me a very vivid picture in my head which is awesome!!! Good descriptions I just had trouble with the capitalization but other than that I didn't see any ...