Soulkana

This is really good. All I say is add some more detail. What do they do when they're excited...how do they react during the wait. Other than that this is ...

Tylyn this is good. I really liked this. From your explanations it was hard to read but it still worked out rather well lols. Keep up the good work and ...

This is very beautiful I want to say! ^^ Good job. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or spelling errors in this at all. The emotion in this sets a ...

Dreamwalker I read this quickly since I'm trying to write something and I want to say good job. I really loved this and the detail is amazing!! Keep up the ...

I honestly didn't see anything wrong with this poem whatsoever so good job!!! Keep up the good work I could feel the emotion in this which makes it easy to ...

Why is it i I only fall Yet everytime i I do i I hear a call Tellling me to get up to keep going on But I'am as weak ...

This is very good and the descriptions are very vivid which paints a very complete picture in my head. Good luck and I hope you get many helpful reviews. Keep ...

I'm really amazed by this poem!! The story it tell is very well done. Also the descriptions paint a very good picture in my head so that is a good ...

I like this very much. This is very descriptive and the emotion is very clear in this!!! Good luck and I couldn't find any spelling errors nor any grammar mistakes ...

She’s sorry she can’t trust, That’s something she’ll have to rise above. She’s sorry things aren’t what you planned She has trouble making her mind up. She’s sorry there’s a ...

Absolutely BRILLIANT!!! I really loved this. The emotion seemed to be clear with every line and every section. The descriptions painted a very clear picture and mood to this poem. ...

I really like this poem. The emotion just flows in the words and the descriptions paint a very vivid and interesting picture in my mind. It makes me want more ...

L was a strange person. He hardly asked me questions or spoke at all, but that was all right by me. His grey eyes were always glistening when he saw ...

This left me confused very greatly. Sometimes I couldn't see who was talking; you should try and explain before or after the spoken parts who said it. Or else it ...

I really honestly looked for mistakes and since my grammar is rather poor I couldn't see any!! Haha. Anyways I love this very much. It is a very creative and ...