Soulkana

Wow this was really really long!! I also learned things about this haha. It reminds me I need to do my debate for Pros and Cons of Same Sex Marriages ...

This was good. The descriptions left a very good picture in my head. I also could feel the emotion in this. You did a very good job and I couldn't ...

Pain was hidden , shallowly in the palms of his Should this not be her? Since the next sentence says her skin? That means its a girl feeling the pain ...

Amelia I must say this is vey well done. The description makes this stand out and paints a very vivid picture in my mind. This is very good. I can ...

I will!!!! Haha I plan on having fun with it XD

I so believe we can do this!! XD

Thanks I know I do tried looking out for it

thanks!!!!! its worth 30 points x.x wanna prove myself to my class

I didn't know where to place this but I knew it was history and short story so I placed it here. If its in the wrong category please help me ...

Pain seared across Alec’s palm, a brilliant light filled his vision. “Alec, we are the Academy. The only safe place for you now, you’ve been marked out as a mage ...

This was really good it flowed very good and the descriptions really brought life into this. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more of your works ...

Awesome job haha. Oh I believe everyone hasn't done their homework due to this awesome site at one point or another!!! Like me XD I'm suppose to looking up stuff ...

I really loved this ^^ amazing details it paints a very vivid picture in my head. Good luck and I hope you get many helpful reviews. I cannot find any ...

Thanks I don't know if I just misspelled that hahaha. I'll fix it XD Thanks for the review happy You liked it ^^

lol havent started chapter two yet am working on Violet Saga hahahaha. so XD yup