Soulkana

Near the beginning you have the main character asking the little brother if he wanted to help wake Summer up but you forget to capitalize her name. Other than that ...

I really liked this Cairo!!! Really adds to the air of mystery XD. Good job and I will most definitely be keeping tabs on this novel! Keep up the good ...

Ok so I really like this story gives a very impressive ring to it haha. Good job and I have one correction as of now. In the line "Are you ...

Yeah I noticed things were getting rather awkward at the beginning but I will fix that later on...I'm going to try and write this in third person next time to ...

Distant familiar memories flashed through my head sending emotions of both happiness and sadness, mostly sadness through me. Images of a newborn baby with distinct brown eyes smiling and crying ...

I'm not sure if I want to add on to this mainly since I do not do good with historical writings.....since I really am bad at history nor is it ...

I really liked this although it does seem to be slightly cliche to the plot but that doesn't stop the fact this was really well done. You have talent and ...

Like Amfliflier pointed out in the review why didn't they tell her? I"m confused; Will you add that later on or no? Either way this was very well done haha. ...

This was very beautifully well done in my opinion! I hope that you write more of this so I may keep reading!!! I found some mistakes but those have already ...

I like this a lot!!! This made me smile and also reminds me of an old story I might think of rewriting now! Haha. Good job and I can't wait ...

It wasn't common but some did. It was very common for no survivals but if people didn't survive then how did they recover? XD. Anyways thanks for the review and ...

Hmm this is a very interesting and compelling piece of work!! I can't wait to read more!!! Your descriptions were good and it gave me a good picture in my ...

Very descriptive and it pulled me in on the first line! Keep up the good work!! Your descriptions painted a very vivid picture in my head and I could emotion ...

Like I said in the other review this would be good for you to space out the paragraphs and dialogues so its easier to see who is talking and such. ...

This made me sad but I really liked it. I hope you continue on. I have one tip which is separate the dialogues so it is easier to read and ...