Soulkana

I like how this is turning out very well!!! Good job and keep up the good work...you described the characters and the scene very well and I could easily picture ...

Hii there my names Lizzy or at least its an abbreviation of my middle name haha. I love fantasy and Poetry...not good at third person to save my life!!!! Well ...

Hahah you got ALL the stereotypes for us lovely and brooding teenagers. This made me laugh and laugh till I was laughing on the floor unable to stop... very nicely ...

I really liked this and I can't wait to read more of your works soon...Keep up the good work!!!!! I love this and I hope to see more from you ...

I love this Kit Kat!!! Like it reminds me of Spring and of the Earth and it makes me truly happy haha. It is sort of bland but like in ...

As others have pointed out this is rather bland but it has magnificent potential!!!! Just add to it and throw yourself into those feelings and write them into it...if you ...

Hey Stori!!! I have one thing to say: describe. Not that this is bad! No not at all just need to expand it and add more detail. I'm really confused ...

Wow amazing!!! I really liked it XD Good job and keep up the good work hehe. I hope to read more of your works soon ^^ Good luck and Happy ...

Still doing amazing Alex!!! ^^ Good job I liked this chapter very much. I like your style of writing and I can't wait to read more of it tomorrow when ...

Truly amazing Alex!!! This made me cry and laugh. It was beautiful and I truly truly can't wait for more!!! Keep up the good work and I will most definitely ...

Her name was Lila. She was 9 years old. She was walking home from school when she saw the smoke. It billowed out from around the garage door, black and ...

I'm sorry I had meant to review this long before now haha. Alas, I became so busy I wasn't able to finish reading it due to an insane amount of ...

The mystery of this is compelling me to keep going haha. Good job with this and the air of mystery and the details you placed in this made me want ...

So the plot continues to thicken and the mystery continues haha. Good job with this...I'm not one to point out many grammar or spelling errors so sorry for the inability ...

I often avoided the library. It was full of dusty books, nerds scrambling to finish typing some report , This is only an opinion but I wouldn't use a comma: ...