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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Birds On a Wire

    Really love this Persephonesia it was beautiful. I can't find anything wrong with this at all so yays!!1 Really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your ...

    May 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Crazy.

    I liked this very much even if its slightly creepy lols. it had a nice plot but you need to describe more haha. I couldn't find any spelling errors that ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Only You

    This made me smile! I really loved this and I hope to red more of your work soon. Your friend sounds really nice and this poem was very sweet I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lifewish: Prologue

    I really enjoyed this my only suggestion is to space paragraphs and dialogues so people don't lose their spot or not know who is speaking the lines. Other than that ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Today, we dance.

    Laughter bounces off the walls as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Perform. Today, we dance. Swaying, stumbling, panting, falling. Someone stated earlier I don't think ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread

    Awwwws poor tinkembells!!! Haha we are still going strong people!! And like you said Team Bamboozle will not fail because of it!! I hope we do get to 700 would ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: 3 Days in Hades

    I liked this very much and I hope you will fix it. I just wanted to point out maybe you should space paragraphs and dialogues so its easier to read; ...

    May 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: When a flower withers

    I liked this Ashley but I have to say you need more emotion in this! Describe lols and normally I don't like describing but this would really shine if you ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter Nine: ORIGINALLY CHAPTER 8

    Thanks for the review vison and I hope you will read the others lols! If you haven't already either way thanks for the review and I'll fix that later on!! ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Seasons

    I really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your works!!! There wasn't any grammar mistakes that I could see from here so maybe someone else will ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Last Angel chapter two

    Still loving this tinkembell haha. Can't wait for more!!! Please update soon? Haha once again couldn't find any spelling errors nor grammar....I"m just a bit lost when Keira comes in ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Last Angel chapter one

    I really liked this!! It gives a different and very compelling tale of angels and I loved it!!! Your descriptions are great and I can't find anything really wrong with ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Forbidden Sea

    Haha I had to read this again I really liked it a second time as well!!! Normally I can't stand to read things twice since I already know what happens...least ...

    May 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Life, Love, and Tragedy - Chapter One

    Hmm I wonder how this will turn out in the end. You described everything great in my opinion I couldn't find any spelling errors nor grammar so that's good. I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: hemlock

    I reallly liked this and I hope to sincerely read more of your works!!! Keep up the good work. I didn't find any spelling errors at all with this!!! It ...

    May 1, 2011


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold