Soulkana

This was great!!! I had read the other chapters but I couldn't review when I got done....I blame school XD. Anyways amazing job and I really liked it! Keep up ...

My point was too bring what starts to happen at the end but this isn't exactly what happens. I don't know how to explain it at all x.x I honestly ...

I really liked this my probem; TOO LONG. Another is you need to separate your paragraphs and dialogues so we readers don't get lost, which I did too many times ...

AWESOME!!!!!! I really loved this and it made me smile! So sweet. You need to expand and give more details about your characters so we can understand them haha. Either ...

Think you could've expanded this a lot more Anime. It is a good start but you should add on to it. Hopefully you will since it has a lot of ...

Pondering sleep of mine Around my waking body blackened vine The knife held in hand pulses with light Trying to carve my last night Glinting with a deadly glare Pressed ...

I underlined what she signed and what she didn't. Hope that helps ^^

This was like woah! That was amazing ^^ Good job anime keep up the good work!!!! I really loved this and I can't find anything wrong that no one has ...

This made me sad but that's ok. It was really thought out and the emotion was beautiful. Keep up the good work! This was amazing and I can't wait to ...

Ehh I meant her to seem older; not sure if I did it right or not. Hmm Thanks for the review and I'll try my best x.x Not sure how ...

Thanks once again for the review Tenyo I'll do my best to try and fix the mistakes. Yes I began to notice that and was planning on getting rid of ...

@Tenyo, Yes I noticed that as well when I went through it; I just don't have enough time to fix it as it is..with school coming to a close. Am ...

Haha Glad you enjoy Young Writers haha. I really love it too!!! Am glad Nate created it!! Makes me glad I'm a writer XD

Nice job I really enjoyed this haha. Good luck and I hope to read more soon!! I already took a look at the prologue and reviewed so I hope that ...

I really liked this and I hope you continue to do poetry you really are good at it!!! Keep up the good work and Happy Writing. I couldn't find anything ...