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Really like it sis!! I'm glad I could help you just a little bit on it XD. You and your and and buts at the beginning XD. Anyways this turned ...

I really like it sis!!! Can feel the emotion in this and I totally understand the depression....Been through it too. It was beautiful and I can't wait for you to ...

This is a very ROUGH draft at the present time grammar and critique welcome so long as you give a way to help...I shall be revising and adding more to ...

I really like this poem. Truly amazing. My one point is: you start out all the same. Maybe that's my opinion but you could word the beginnings different so you ...

* Report this post Sleepless Night New postby animekaratepup on Mon May 02, 2011 2:02 pm ......I was depressed in highschool, ok? And 'm posting the stuff I've written so ...

I discovered YWS when I was getting tired of no reviews on and if I did they didn't help me improve so I went on Google to find a better ...

Nice Job Nite I really like it. It made me smile because it reminds me of the circus and the hall of mirrors there. I alway got the image decribed ...

Wow this makes me want to get back into Naruto!!! Haha Amazing I meant to review your other chapters but that never workd out so Yay. I really liked this ...

Thanks for the reply and I normally think people would read the first chapters before reading this one. And some are explained in earlier chapters...I think? I can't remember been ...

Hey I had meant to review like A HECK of a lot sooner Written....I got...sidetracked >> yes that's it sidetracked XD. Either way amazing with your wonderful descriptions XD....even if ...

Really loved it. Its true boredom brings out the best in us writers ^^. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!! Happy Review Day and best ...

Drama how sweet it can be and how dangerous lols. Anyways I really really loved this... I can't wait for more so update soon!!! Good luck as I didn't find ...

Oh dear now I want to know what happens next haha!! Keep writing I eagerly await more!! Your descriptions are perfect. The tone makes the mood of this very reasonable! ...

Plot still going strong here Alex!!!!! hehe I wonder what Ari will do haha. Anyways I hope to read more of this soon keep updating!!! I didn't find any spelling ...

Still loving this I'm sorry I didn't review before now or the second chapter been kinda busy but I love the plot and I couldn't find any spelling errors to ...