Soulkana

Hola, I'll be reviewing this nice piece of poetry of yours this hot afternoon while in Business class....XD So here it goes: Well I must say I am impressed by ...

Konnichiwa~ Ok I really absolutely loved this poem. Odd right? Usually I'm not a poetry reviewer since I just love reading them and can never say I liked this because ...

Must point out I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think your descriptions are nicely well done. I can't really point anything wrong about this. I hope you do well on it. ...

I spotted others after I submitted them so I say to read through it and find the sentences and dialogues that don't end with punctuation marks...But other than that there ...

Lucy “Get up! I said get up!” she shouted at me. “I don’t want to fight you” I tried to diffuse the situation. “You should have thought about that before ...

This is well done and I really liked it because of how you worded it and all the points you pointed out. Such as its all they get is true ...

Someone pointed out about my reference to Vampires- Let me say that will be shown later on. What I can say is that the vampires are usually in separate groups ...

Awww this is kind of me in a way hehe. I liked it because it shows truth in its words. The one thing I don't like is the shortness of ...

I like how this turned out and must say it is an improvement from the first version. Also you need to come up with a new title to portray the ...

Noooou If ANYONE is gonna eat moi its Alicy!!!! Mwahaha anyways love the story and I need help sis T.T Am on Google Docs

Yay!!!! I"m a fortune cookie!!!!! giggles that means someones going to eat me!!!!???? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I don't wanna be eaten T.T Still love the story sister!!!! hugs*

Hey there sis!!! Glad to see a new update!!! Anyways in the first paragraph in the sentence "You that pillar of salt....that's my wife? You left you the word See! ...

Haha this was better the second time around hahah!! Nice job and keep up the good works ^^ Happy Writing and Best of Wishes. No grammar I could spot but ...

Its turning out good so far sis! Keep up the good works!! Hugs* Can't wait to read more ^^ I liked how you have put an interesting spin on the ...

Oh jeez this made me like WOAH!!! Haha Good job!! I hope you write more and keep up the good work. Truly epic I loved it. Can't wait for more ...