Soulkana

Since I haven't read the other chapters I'm a bit confused. However I got what it was about and say nice job. I really liked how this was written but ...

Hey Amelia I'm here as promised!!! This was amazing. The first line caught my eyes and I couldn't resist reading the rest. ^^ I honestly don't have any complaints...not much ...

The sound of my name being softly uttered like a mere whisper of the wind jolts me awake just as dawn is breaking. The faint smell of mint incense wrafts ...

Creak. Thump. 'Someone is getting too close.' I think, as I look for an escape route, the tiny cabin now being filled with toxic smoke. The wind only fuels the ...

My fingers twist the page, A never ending cycle. My fingers drum against the cover. Yet still the thoughts allude me. Days pass aimlessly, growls of frustration echoes my room. ...

Thanks guys. This is based of something personal. I haven't heard from someone I love dearly in almost four months now...Kinda slowly sinking me into depression. But I have my ...

Four months have passed now, have you noticed at all, my love? Maybe you have but don't care. Or maybe you can't say hello. My mind fumbles through the days. ...

Hi Amelia, You asked and I'm here so. I must stay this was beautifully well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the emotions and the poetry. My only suggestion is to split ...

Ok so in order for me to keep my Spanish up I decided I would try to have dialogues in Spanish with some of my characters. Beside the sentences I ...

Hehe loved this a lot. The emotion was impressive and I liked the detail. Sorry I will give a better review later on..can't think of what to say which is ...

I loved this...a little bit depressing but that's all good ^^. I liked how you describe each line and how it flows rather nicely together. I can't find anything grammar ...

Mwahaha genius!! I bet this will be my dad's reaction whenever I start driving XD. I like how some parts are long and some lines only have one word...adds to ...

Hello, I'm back for a much better review haha. Ok so I loved this idea and think you will do great. I just say need to add details and at ...

Eeh she loved commas....didn't change it since I'm not good with commas man. So I'll fix it and if you want help with the explaining I can send you a ...

Hey there, Sorry this is a very short is wayyyyyyyy past my bedtime and I need rest. I'll add to reading list and most definitely look and give a much ...