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Again the question came, “are you okay?” I shrugged, flashed a fake smile, and continued walking. In silence. The A in Are should be capitalized because it's beginning of a ...

I absolutely loved this this. Haha. Very creative and hilarious. Can't wait to read more of your works ^^. Good luck. I couldn't find anything wrong with spelling and it ...

I absolutely loved this. It is short but completely fulfills your idea and emotion clearly. I can't see anything wrong with this to be honest you did rather well. Keep ...

I see you, but do you see me? I'm focused on your every move. Seeing you isn't easy, but somehow I'll make it through. The memories I have of you, ...

Ok Tanya

Rosey points out very good points, Judy. Just remember that us reviewers are here to make you improve. So you can truly blossom in your works. I know of Star ...

It was meant to be very very off on what I wanted. I did rush because my idea was slipping through my fingers and I need to write what I ...

Chapter One "My Lord, we need more towels." A frantic midwife orders as she turns her attention back to the mother whose face is pale as a sheet. The young ...

Hi Princess haha. I wanted to say wow. I got hooked on this at once. I hope to read more soon

The secrets behind me. A tight smile and warm eyes, No one knows the secrets. I smile and laugh, Its so easy now. To fake the truth. My hands shake, ...

Chapter One: The Letter 'Where is she??' I think desperately as I run through the dark hallways and up the limestone stairs. The sound of the clock chiming its twelve ...

Random Title that might be changed later... Is rough draft. Please help with grammar and whatever else to make this better. It will be a present to my youngest sister... ...

This was a rough draft and I thank you for the reviews. I will fix it later on...most likely during school ^^ I didn't put as much into as I ...

The minutes tick on The clock is counting, Down the time goes. Yet still it's not fast enough. A day passes, still not enough. Another and another. But still no ...

Prologue My fingers trace the elegant writing on the cover of Poisons and Antidotes: The Expert Guide . The knowledge that this book held will be forthcoming for my duty. ...