Soulkana

Drama

Hi there! Well I must say I truly enjoyed this. The description and emotion in this makes it beautiful to read. It paints a clear picture of the scene in ...

Chapter 4: Leaving for the west....and two more? With my eyes closed I breathe deeply as the wind gently rustles the leaves of the ancient oak I am sitting beneath. ...

Haha. Thanks I've fixed that on the copy I have in my Pages document but forgot to fix it on here before I want to sleep and because I'm going ...

Haha thanks Adriana! I know that that needs some serious fixing but I will save that for when it's done ^^. But rest assured that I will fix it when ...

Any criticism is appreciated. I will edit this once I got most or all of the novel down so I can make sure my inspirations don't fade ^^. Chapter 3: ...

Heyyyy Solv....here's something I could use some help with. ^^ Enjoy

Adriana I think this was very sad but very very amazingly written. I can't spot very many issues with it and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. And I'm sorry O.o. ...

Well Artsy first thing I want to say is welcome to Young writers ^^. Second this was very well done. I enjoyed the emotions and the way you wrote it. ...

Hahah. Well Judy

This is a rough draft. Any criticism is welcome for I know I'll always need help with something when it comes to rough draft. Otherwise it wouldn't be a rough ...

Creeping & crawling thru Should be through the darkness. onward ever trudging thru should be through, again the mud. Lost to a world the light and life. deeper into darkness ...

Hey it's Soulkana here! Well first off these was amazing. The emotion and the flow was brilliant. My only correction is the first line which I think the word "runaway" ...

Well Irene I must say that was disturbing but it was very well done. I enjoyed how it moves and how you described everything. I can't pick anything wrong with ...

Hey It's Soulkana here ^^, Well first think I have to say is that I absolutely enjoyed the emotion in this. It was nicely well done. I must point out ...