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Ashleylee, Vampireknight and Dreamworx - thank you all for your kind comments and suggestions. Ashleylee - I really like your idea of using one and incorporating the other (I was ...

Wow - thank you guys (Lynlyn, Smoo, Xavia & Miked) so much for all your comments and attention to small details ;P A couple of you pointed out the redundant ...

Helloooooooooooooooo This is an excerpt froma historical/fantasy item I began a while back. It is not necessarily the first chapter but it introduces a character and I think it's enough ...

Thank you R. :D I really appreciate your comments and will make corrections to this piece soon. I briefly browsed your portfolio and I have to say I rather enjoyed ...

Hm. Alright - thanks again, I'll be sure to review this scene carefully with your observations in mind.

Oh, sorry - one more thing I wanted to point out to help you with this piece. You have a great imagination, but your scentences are too short and makes ...

Okay, I was reading your piece and for someone so young I am blown away by your writing abilities - though it was far from perfect (grammatically speaking) its incredible ...

hmmmm... this is the second item where I've seen Arekusu accusing someone of plagarism.... Just an FYI Cobra does NOT have an item with the same name at all in ...

Thank you both for your wonderful and kind compliments :) Bishop - 'guinea pig' was exactly how I thought of myself and those within my age group as we went ...

Thank you so much for the comment SG. I wasn't even really sure if this fell in the category of a 'poem' per se, but I am glad you enjoyed ...

Dude. Wow. Thank you soooooooo much!!! (for all your kind compliments and all your pointers on grammar mistakes and everything else inbetween). I seriously need someone with your eye and ...

Hello, I was intrigued by the title so I thought I would take a look and leave a quick review :) I love the concept of starting this with a ...

Hey, this is the new installment for my novel 'When Innocence Dies'. In the prologue we were introduced to two characters: Lamia & Luther (#1) and Lamia & Sangard (#2) ...

Hello Suzanne, I am new to YWS. I appreciate the comment and I don't mind the harsh critcism if its useful and valid which yours is. Perhaps I should have ...

This is a very personal piece to me. I used to have a very close guy friend - we were inseperable for seven years, then one day things happened and ...