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hello - thanks for the review. In answer to your questions: Is Kydia human? If not, why would another world be speaking in Japanese? That would be highly unlikely, considering ...

Here is the next installment of Dream Weavers. This story was inspired by a dream I had and I have been toying with the idea of completing this piece and ...

Hey Ashley & Alltime Thanks for your reviews. As of Monday I submitted this the agent I've been scoping out for the better part of a year (eeep!) So, fingers ...

Hey Ashley & Alltime Thanks for your reviews. As of Monday I submitted this the agent I've been scoping out for the better part of a year (eeep!) So, fingers ...

You know, you don't need to create a new post everytime you update/edit a piece. Just recopy the new text in the origional body and maintain the origional post - ...

This is a rewrite of chapter one. For those of you who have read it, how do you find the new approach? Is it stronger then before? If not, then ...

Generally speaking yes, but I would be careful regardless - make mention in a blurb before you post that your are aware you're making use of another author's concept so ...

I rarely and I mean rarely plan my stories start to finish. Generally I like to have an idea but in most cases the endings are a bit of a ...

Hello *waves* Hm. Okay, I agree with the other reviewers. Incredibly short - especially for a prologue. I think anything less then 2/3rds of a page is a waste and ...

Awww thanks Ashleylee. I appreciate the constant support. :)

Sounds way familiar, Hellsing perhaps? Huh??? I have no idea what you're talking about. Either way, I appreciate the review. I will keep your pointers in mind for future. Cheers.

**************************** Ok, here are my concerns with this piece. Where Lamia is explaining to Laura what happened to her in her past, should I leave it as is - where ...

For those of you who have been following this piece, this chapter does not follow immediately after Chapter 8. I will no longer be posting full chapters or in order ...

Hello, Here is the most recent installment to my novel. I have written this piece well in advance and am pushign close to thirty chapters at this point - still ...

Hello What I noticed (more then anything else) is the lack of description in the first part. You give us their eyes, and the occassional hair color, but not much ...