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Hello YWS, this is just a short description from the new book I'm writing. Sorry, I didn't want to give too much away just yet... :D She stood there, sweating ...

Haha it makes more sense now. :)

Hello, I'd like to review this for you. Dark clouds formed over Lakeview High that could only be a bad omen, but nothing could damper my mood today. Not too ...

Hello Esme, Thank you so much for reviewing that! It's so nice to get a review that actually includes some praise as well as the critical stuff! :D You mentioned ...

Hey All you won't rememeber me because I've only just joined this great website but welcome back anyway! :elephant:

Hello, I'm Sophie and I'd like to review this for you :) Firstly, you don't mention who exactly Carla is but I'm presuming she's a social worker or something? "You're ...

Hey Sophie :D My name's Sophie too and I'm also from England but I'm 13. I joined the website to get some feedback on the novel I'm writing and also ...

Thanks a lot for taking the time to review that, you have made some really useful points! Firstly, you mentioned that I tell rather than show and that I need ...

Hi Maddy, Thank you for taking the time to review this. You have mentioned that I 'tell the story' rather than 'show what's going on' and that I should use ...

Ivan was forever drunk. It was supposed that the malodorous, insane and imbecilic drunkard that had come with Ivan’s drink obsession had destroyed the once unruffled, motivated and supportive brothe

It was black. Pitch black. The moon shone brightly in the sinister black sky as it glided like a ghostly ship across the dark expanse. Not a star could be ...