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Re: The Journalist
Well, firstly I have two things to apologise for: 1) I'm not such a good reviewer so I'm just going to give you a few quick comments. 2) I'm under ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
Hahaha far enough. It's Noomi Rapace as Lisbeth Salander and Mikael Nyquest (spelling?) as Mikael Blomkvist in the film adaptation of 'The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo' xD
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: I need the advice of my fellow writers!
Thanks DeadEnds! Yup, that was pretty helpful! :D I have no experience with Alzheimer's but I find the subject fasinating, that's why I'm working on the idea. So, hearing about ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
Hey Cass! Thanks! Yes, I'm really interested in the topic to! But it's really complex so it'll probably take time! I'm starting to get a feel for the plot in ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Arachnophobia
Wow Persy! I don't usually review poetry but these are my general thoughts: This is definately my kind of thing! Absolutely love dark writing. :D tearing the skin from bone ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
Hey xDudettex! Thanks for that, the comments were really helpful! I shall edit those mistakes! -Sop. :)
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
I like it! 9/10 Reminds me of Black Swan, the way that it's partly light and dark...like showing the contrast in the White Swan and the Black Swan! -Sop.
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The Diary Of Harriet McCully Chapter 1
Hey Bug! Well, this is quite short so I can't really give a proper review but...I like it. This would make a good prologue for a novel rather than a ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
Thanks for the comment! :) Yeahh, I wanted to write about how grief and suffering is almost physical. Almost like being beaten up... The main character is going to be ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
This is general fiction. :) It's just a short intro to a novel I'm working on. I just want to know if it's too heavy/ too much description...that kinda' thing. ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The Review Bin
Thanks again Isha! :) -Sop.
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
Hey YWS! Sooo, as some of you on chat may know, I'm working on a novel based on finding out where memories go after memory loss, through the eyes of ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Flawed Corrections: Verisimilitude - Chapter 2-3
Hey Doc! Well, I'm not a very experienced reviewer but here are some of my thoughts on this piece! : I like the first line; It's snappy and get's the ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: What You Really Mean to Me
Hey! Well, first things first...this seems to be a love song which isn't really my thing. It bugs me how artists these days seem to have only love, break-ups and ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: I need the advice of my fellow writers!
Thanks for the reply Kay! Yeah I thought that the first idea seemed a bit more exciting. And it's fiction so I can be as creative as I like! I've ...
Feb 23, 2011
