SophieSays

Hey, I'm Sophie. I really enjoyed this, but there were a couple of things I thought could be improved. Inspiration is a (n? To match your last sentence?) interesting concept. ...

I thought this was really good - a lovely idea. I'm really glad you posted it. It was a pale green grassy patch with little critters (this sounds a bit ...

This is really good - KanenRenoir has pointed out most of the things I had a problem with - I don't have time to review it today, but if you ...

Hey, I am new too, but I've already read some of your poems and they are amazing! I'll definitely check out your novel as well. Welcome to YWS! Sophie

Hey, After reading your haikus, I went straight to your portfolio to see what else I could read of yours. You're a really good writer, with really nice images. Here's ...

Firstly, very nice! I love the images in both of these. I'll start with the first one: The first two lines sound a bit like they're saying the same thing? ...

I really like this. There were only two nitpicky things, one of which has already been pointed out. The other was I didn't think clutch to my flesh read quite ...

Overall I really enjoyed it!It's really good - especially for someone who hasn't written a stor for over a year. I am intrigued by Drysks, but there were a couple ...

Sure. I've done KanenRenoir's and I'll have a look at yours shubhiloves2write!

Hey, I really enjoyed this! It is described really well, but, like Aushy said, I think you need to describe some of the surroundings. Trying to incorporate it without slowing ...

I really like this - it's very original and you have a really unique writing style. Kai is already an intriguing character. However, some parts confused me or jarred a ...

Firstly - this was really good. I loved the last line. However, (and I am not really sure how to explain this) the first line Moon light though windows could ...

Hey, Thanks for the nice welcome and the rules! I am finding the forums a bit daunting at the moment, so if you want to point me towards some stuff ...

Hey, I am new and willing to review short fiction/poetry for points! What I Will Review: - Magical Realism - Historical - A mix of the two! What I Won't ...

Hi, I have been lurking around here for a while, but seeing the writers olympics meant I had to join! :D Is anyone else doing them? Sophie