SophieSays

Nobody wants a review?

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments. This is my first proper project for a while, so its nice to know I haven't become too rusty! Part two should be out ...

Hello. Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: ...

Hello. Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: ...

Formerly posted as: The Man In The Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One I am currently rewriting this, but you are still welcome to read it. :) This is intended ...

I really enjoyed this - I'll look out for the next part. This may not make much sense, but I felt like you were describing them as what you could ...

All done! Anyone else want a review? I am really looking for some good stuff to read!

Hi, I am Sophie - here to review, as requested! I am not really sure how I feel about the first one - it's definitely well drawn, the hand in ...

Hi Sophie - me again! I really like this, your style seems to fit romance, although I don't think you should use more than one adjective for each word you ...

Hi Sophie, thank you very much for the gift. I decided to critique your work in exchange, hope this is alright! :) I think PhoenixBishop is spot on with most ...

Hello and welcome to my shop, where you can request reviews and get them delivered within forty-eight hours. Here are some things to keep in mind when shopping: - I ...

Hello. I am going to crit this bit by bit, so I won't get as much sense of the 'flow' but I will get how the feel in each one ...

I'll do it as soon as possible.

Despite not liking anything too romantic, I really did enjoy this. Today I bought a real guitar-learning set, with a DVD in all I didn't think 'in all' works as ...

I really like this. The vibrant bow compared to the sort of muted other colours is lovely. However, I didn't really like how it was cut off at the top, ...