Sophie

Uh oh, starting to get a bit too proud of this poem. I think i might start writing ALL my poems in the bath.... *cough*

Woo! *basks in praise... even if it's not really mine.....*

I loved it. It was quite beautiful and it seemed to capture a lot. I particularly liked the second stanza, esp the second half. But i have to say I ...

I guess it kinda does. It is about changing growing, but keeping the past tucked away somewhere. Sigh, maybe, not too corny?

Yay. Well I'm very pleased with Snoink's comment. forest_ofthe_nightingale - I kinda see what you mean about the careless thing. And xanthan gum - the slings bit (kinda stolen from ...

I liked the "Wasted Wednesdays" bit But I agree with everyone that the "Why pick only one day to love?" bit is classic. Don't mind if I use that do ...

I think it's a good idea actually. At first I thought, well I don't really care about how many points I have, more worried about posts. But now I've realised ...

Ok, new try. Still don't know what to change the title to, but I will. I got sick of all your whispered nothings, And seasonal sighs of reminiscence. The fog ...

Heroine She knows I long for her, Despite the staring she causes, Despite the sickness she brings me, Forgetting all the costs Never mind the wounds she’s left me, The ...

Is it wrong that I loved this?... I should try it without the loud music and pay a little more attention, but I just.... liked it.... Ok I really gotta ...

timjim77 - Why do I have to change the title? Do you have any suggestions for a replacement? xanthan gum - Not too harsh. Thanks. Any suggestions on improving the ...

Yeah this is good. The layout could have easily distorted it too much, but it didn't, it kind of enforced it. I like it.

Basically I had the first two verses in another poem and I really liked them, but I feel the rest just let it down. Any advice? I got sick of ...

Ok I love this... But I don't know why I love this. I need to mull over this. And I'll be glad to do so.

So by make it into prose do you mean use the same idea but change the format entirely? To be honest I dont know how I thought I could tackle ...