Sophie

Reef - Place Your Hands Oh place your hands, on my hope, Run your fingers through my soul, And the way that I feel right now, Oh lord it may ...

"If there was no such thing as change, there'd be no butterflies" "If you spit whilst running fast, it hits you in the face." Anyone else care to share?

Going Underground by The Jam Some people might say my life is in a rut, But I’m quite happy with what I got People might say that I should strive ...

Damn you niteowl!!!! I was gonna put them up!!!!!

They were in a windowless hallway because it felt safer. Since they had been shot at through one, and windows can be paranoia enducing at the best of times. I ...

It was English Lit, never the most exciting lesson, but never the worst. The note was on the orange paper of the questions sheet we were suppposed to be answering. ...

Sam: These...are feeling rocking... No actually, "These are fecking rocking." feck being the Irish equivilant to fuck. You use the word 'rock' in the next sentence, so it sounds really ...

By the way, it doesn't really get scary yet The wine tasted good on her tongue, and had a pleasant after taste in her throat. Opium scent incense and red ...

D :shock: D (DUDE)!!!! Amazingly written, my friends continue to exclaim "It's like poetry". Hartnett uses imagery (particularly colour), raw human emotion, and pure trickery to spin a web of ...

I'm still in love with you. it's a simple thing to say… Well not really; but I’m sure all the pain and anger and pure frustration of the last year ...

I wrote this when I was ten I think... So don't be too brutal... Just wondered if someone could give me some tips so I could improve it and make ...

Ok so, note to self: "Lotta love in this room" style thing ruins it a little, try to sort it out.

Wow, there's actually alot of useful critisism. I guess I can edit it and improve it a little, but not too easily, since it means a lot personally. But thanks.

*feels praised* -- Well that'll jynx it and soon I'll get negativity but oh well... Sounds like my poetry's improving! Woo!

I kinda liked it, not sure why. Esp the: "Cuts By Thursday Because it hurts too much Not cliché – She’s not poetic enough for that"