Sophia_x

Hi y'all :) okay this is a chapter later on in my novel. before u ask why i dont post from the beginning its cos i kinda write random parts ...

Apart from cry? I would make up a fake identity while spending every moment of every waking minute trying to discover who i was and who was behind this. What ...

Lexie would go back in time to prevent Damien from becoming powerful by killing the man who made him so. However, once she got there she realised she couldn't do ...

Hey thanks guys, u really made me feel good :P yeah, this was one of the few parts i was fully happy with but im sure u'll see when i ...

hey this is an excerpt from my novel. I have already posted this scene but this version is a vast change to the other. Please tell me what you think. ...

I think your idea is really good and well worth writing! Your prologue is a really nice start and i like how you described things, you really have an imaginative ...

I'm standing :) i love reading and writing fantasy and i totally agree with you all. Fantasy gives you the freedom to explore and create and get lost in completely ...

I stand here alone An empty space beside me Cold air The place where you should be But you are not here You did not come You left me to ...

hey all this is a section quite a bit through my book but im unsure on it so please tell me what you think. Lots of comments are welcome. Thank ...

Hey:) Some of you might have read this before because i posted this when there were no corrections. I have now added a small paragraph at the beginning and corrected ...

Thanks Wolf! Ill take what you have said aboard and try to make it better! Thank you :)

Hey guys, this is the first chapter of my first novel. It wod be great if you could give me some tips and advice for how to improve and just ...

Hey! That's really good! You've kept me interested and im desperate to know how he is familiar to her. I especially love the fact that they clashed at the beginning, ...

Hey Kate :) I think this is really good but the punctuation mistakes pointed out are well worth noting. i really like the beginning bit as you connect with the ...