Sophia_x

Hey :) i know this excerpt doesn't really make sense because its part way through my novel but it was the first time the two main characters - Lexie and ...

Still here I fall into a world that doesn’t want to catch me It blackens as it fades away Leaving just traces of hope and love Speaking of words no ...

Couldn't have said it better myself :) (no seriously, i couldn't have, i wouldn't know where to start lol) This has really helped me with my story, i have a ...

thanks guys :) your comments have been well noted and i am making the corrections now. I didn't realise there were so many mistakes *blushes* :wink: thanks again, it was ...

gee thanks guys, all these compliments, i don't know what to do with myself :P I'm not saying anything yet but if there are vamps i promise that if there ...

Hey thanks Lauren! I'm glad you are interested and in answer to your question, yes this is part of a bigger story where everything else will be answered. Thank you ...

Hey, please can you review because it would be very helpful :). x The rain splashed hard against the pavement. The dark sky clouded over London as night reigned in ...

Wow this is really good I read all of your other chapters but i think this one is the best for description wise. The way you describe some things here, ...

Prologue No one said life was easy. Of course it wasn’t otherwise people wouldn’t keep dying of poverty, there would be no gun crime and there would be a lower ...

Hey i'm Sophia and I'm going to review your work :) My sweat palm floated to my chest My sweaty palm whole greatness rivaled heaven’s I don't really understand this ...

Thanks guys and don't worry about sounding harsh, i really need critical feedback to make it better :) thanks all and anyone else who reads it please feel free to ...

Oh sorry :S i didn't explain it very well. My bad :P The voice is just meant to be her conscience but do you think it sounds too much like ...

I really really liked this :) you write with such emotion i don't think you even realise it. I like how she processes the the thoughts about what happenned with ...

Hey I've just been reading all your chapters and i am really enjoying it. I like how we don't know what's going to happen and as this is posted in ...

Thanks :) i'll make some changes. x