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Oh MY GOSH!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH.....LOVE LOVE LOVE :) :) I can't believe how much i love Jordan :) he's so sweet...and the twins thing :shock: wow, didn't see that coming but ...

My dad did :P

ok, I read this a while ago and knew there was something i wanted to say, but i couldn't figure out how to articulate it. The other day I realized ...

I definately liked this...I liked how vivid the dream was and how it kind of connected to real life :) parts were a bit wordy...but overall your writing was pretty ...

You MUST continue!!!! This is really good!! I really like how it was told from his perspective I've never seen that done before!!! The story\action was really vivid: i felt ...

TIGERSHARK!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW CAN YOU NAME HIM MARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY?????? Sigh.....u would. :)) I still love u tho.

I totally understood what you were saying about freedom, and by the way I do feel this way about music, but I agree with halogirl about the last paragraph. I ...

One thing I noticed: Food, Jot, Armor and who knows what else can fit in this pack. How big is it??? I love the story though!!!! Please post more!!!!!

Wow, that was really beautiful. I loved reading it. I got lost in your descirpitons and felt like I could actually see the people you were describing. Have you considerd ...

This is beautiful!!! I haven't read very many Chinese stoires, but I thouroughly enjoyed reading this. It has such grace and elegance and reads very smoothly. As I was reading ...

I enjoyed reading this and it has alot of potential, but it was pretty rough. I saw at least one fragment and some other parts didn't make sense. I think ...

I really enjoyed reading this!!! I actually prefer more anylitical writing and this piece was a beautiful example. One thing I would say was I felt in the piece dashes ...

I enjoyed this alot!!! I love anything Dragon related and this had a ton of potential. I was a little confused as I went through it- there felt like there ...

Hey, I LOVED THIS!!!!!!! I'm a dragon lover and have read every book about dragons I could get my hands on!!! I only noticed a couple of things. One, you ...

One thing is perhaps it moves too quickly, I mean, the guy gets hit pretty bad...we can only guess how long he was out but it doesn't seem like it ...