Sometimesinbetween

8/10 Cool! -Sometimes-

This is the first part of the first chapter. A young boy moved slowly up the rocky hillside, stumbling occasionally under his small burden. His father looked down from the ...

With all due respect, how can you believe every word of the Bible? It contradicts not only modern science, but also itself. How can you reconcile, for example, the existance ...

A young boy moved slowly up the rocky hillside, stumbling occasionally under his small burden. His father looked down from the crest of the hill, down past his boy to ...

Is it Gandalf above Helms Deep? (LOTR are awsome movies!) 8/10

Hi! This was really good! :) Here's a couple of things I caught: “In that thing?” She questioned, her eyes roaming over the rust and puttering of the weak engine. ...

I liked this a lot, it flowed so well! Tread lightly when you talk to her measure out your words Loved this. There was only one comma and one period ...

I have a big, green and tan, zip-up notebook that my Mom gave me (it was one of her old ones) that goes everywhere with me. It's very bulky (takes ...

Evenstar (from the LOTR The Two Towers soundtrack)

Hey, this was pretty good! :) Just a couple of things with the punctuation. The last time someone died. Should this have a period after it? This isn't a complete ...

Ok, a couple typos, but otherwise this is great! :D Of course he fared much better then I. 'then' should be 'than'. I found out after I stepped of the ...

Hey, this was good! I only caught two things with the punctuation: Oh attractive shadow how your cool blue hues There should be a comma after 'shadow'. Slowly creeping over ...

This is very pretty! :D However there is a complete lack of punctuation. Was that intentional? The moon weeps for her friends absents Is this supposed to be 'absence'? Great ...

This really held my attention. I love WWII stories. Awesome description! I couldn't find anything wrong with the grammer or punctuation. Just wanted to say great job! ~Sometimes~

“I am going to be gone tomorrow,” the young prince informed his one and only confidante, the palace cook. She had looked after him since he had been a wee ...