Sometimesinbetween

Dallas (my neighbor's horse)

mashed potatoes

This was very well written. Now to answer your questions: 1. Did it catch my attention? It was ok... I think you could make it a bit more interesting. Marvelous ...

ham

Corn Chex

otter Am I doing it right? RSE The letters must not touch

7/10 cute!

okra

This is my friend's critique (she's a band geek :D ) technically i resent the remarks made but i see where you're coming from. wind band is a little more ...

This was really good! It flowed very nicely except for one part. All of the stanzas except for the second and third have no punctuation other than a period at ...

8/10 Pretty! But what is it from?

Loved this! :D I do agree with Rieda though that it needs some puncuation. The foggy shadow emerges A ghostly ship of lore Loved this line! This has great potential! ...

9/10 Pretty cool! :)

I liked this it a lot! :D I couldn't find anything wrong the puncuation or grammer. Tell me you love me, 'Cause I've never been wanted. Love this line. Great ...

Hey this was good! I liked it. I just caught a couple things I thought might be typos. :D How do you Decide between The two You call you Friends? ...